This is My very first Attempt to write a (so called) Poem. Hope you all like it.
I sat in a chair looking at the night sky
I sat in a chair looking at the night sky
And winked at the moon with my right eye
Lost in her Beauty, sipping my iced tea
Hoping she would wink back at me
I waited until she faded away
Only to realize all that was an array
It only had the life span of a night
As the world rotated with its might
Next night I looked for that beautiful face
Only to find that she was not in place
Only to find that she was not in place
I feared that I might have frightened her
Because that was all what I could Infer
I gazed into the dark sky
Hoping for a felicitous sigh
But never did she show her face
Which made my mind a null space
I whispered to her not to go away
And that I will not wink again anyway
So she just peeped at me the next day
As if it was a sign she’ll stay
I stared at her until she faded away
Hoping to see her every next day

Really good for a so called first attempt!!!
ReplyDeleteRhyming is good and also provides a vivid picture.Good one Ali :)
ReplyDeletePerfectly put up well framed the words fell in place, great one bro :) --Saif aka Safwan ;)
ReplyDeletesatheesha... kalakki!! ... Gud one bruv!
ReplyDeleteawesome man !!
ReplyDeleteGood beginning Ali :-) Way to go...
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